Cover:
Liked the gradient and how it goes from the cover to the front.
Wished that the title was bigger, maybe lining up with the pixels on the cover.
Pages 1-2:
The illustration of the earth was done well.
The pixels going on both sides looks well incorporated.
We thought that a line break for the sentence "Hi.." would flow better.
Pages 3-4:
The sunglasses seem to be floating.
Maybe add a shadow.
Type is justified and there's no rivers.
Texture on backpack is well done.
Pages 5-6:
Using same colors as cover makes it cohesive.
Pixels around glasses look out of place (the whiter ones).
Text appeared lopsided at first but we understand why the paragraph break was needed.
Pages 7-8:
Line doesn't align or looks like it should.
Using the same colors continue to be cohesive.
Pages 9-10:
Wish there were some pixels behind the text on pg. 10.
It looks like there's a white box.
For the quote by AI maybe have quotation marks.
Carefully align the pages more to not have fact cut off by the page behind.
Ideation for Publication:
City: London, Barcelona, Madrid
How to: Travel
London includes: Places to visit/do: Pubs, London Eye, Royal Family, Buckingham Palace, The Tube, Harrods, London Eye, Telephone Box, Tea
- Checklist: Clothes, things to use for travel
- Design: Day and night tubes or just designed like tube design
Barcelona include: Places to visit: Gaudis architecture, las ramblas, beaches, casa batilo, food, sagrada familia
- Food: Tapas and Plaza Mayor
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